@aperrincycling @TopTweetTuesday a great challenge this week - please see my submission for your consideration- The Shame of Relics in response to the photo. Have a top day Andy, I can’t wait to read everyone’s pieces on my lunch break and when I finish work. #toptweettuesday
@PaulWritesPoems @TopTweetTuesday Stunning piece, Paul. The personification of the iron remains worked so well. The stage setting with the 'forty autumns before' to the squealing cog's 'final/ knell of crunching rust connoting time – super! Love the 'fox's teeth' and the final lines...your form paces so well. 🙏
@PaulWritesPoems @TopTweetTuesday @aperrincycling Nice one, Paul. Love the squealed ‘final knell of crunching rust’.
@PaulWritesPoems @TopTweetTuesday @aperrincycling The narrative draws us in with that opening line! And that last line - super✨
@PaulWritesPoems @aperrincycling @TopTweetTuesday Love all the imagery - fox's teeth, final knell of crunching rust...
@PaulWritesPoems @TopTweetTuesday @aperrincycling Superb Paul, I heard that squeal and crunch.